Thursday, May 26, 2011

COME BACK TO ME...

Hi All,
 In my post Waiting for someone who will never come...... I wrote about a woman who is missing her love and waiting for him to come back,
I was thinking about the man whom she is waiting! I have just tried to express his feelings about her,
Its just my imagination about the feelings of that man!!

STANDING IN THE BALCONY,EVERY NIGHT, 
HIS FAVORITE THING TO DO!!!
SMOKING AND CREATING  RINGS IN THE AIR,
HE CAN SEE HER SMILING FACE IN THE RINGS,
HE KEEPS ON CREATING THE RINGS, 
(Thanks Malliga Shivaram for this image)


HE DOES NOT WANT HER FACE TO DISAPPEAR.
SHE HATED SMOKING, BUT 
SHE  LAUGHED LIKE A BABY, WHEN SHE SAW THOSE RINGS IN THE AIR,
HE SMILES, ONLY HE CAN FEEL THE PAIN IN THAT SMILE,
HE WANTED HER TO BE HAPPY, SMILING ALWAYS, 
NOW HE CRIES FOR NOT KEEPING  HIS PROMISE.

HE DOES NOT REMEMBER WHAT WAS HIS MISTAKE?
HE WANTS TO KNOW, WHY SHE PUT HIM OUT OF HER LIFE?
HE IS SCARED TO GO BACK AND ASK,
ONLY BECAUSE,
HE DOES NOT WANT TO GIVE HER THE PAIN AGAIN.
SHE WAS EVERYTHING TO HIM,
HE WAS THE HAPPIEST PERSON WITH HER,
SHE WAS HIS FIRST LOVE AND THE LAST,
HE STILL WONDERS WHAT HAPPENED TO THEIR LOVE?
WHAT WAS HIS MISTAKE? 
HE LOVED HER THE SAME FROM THE DAY ONE! 
HE STILL LOVES HER THE SAME.
HOW WILL HE MAKE HER UNDERSTAND,
HE MISSES HER EVERYDAY,
HE WANTS HER IN HIS LIFE AGAIN, 
HE IS WAITING FOR THAT MOMENT WHEN SHE WILL BE WITH HIM 
AND THEIR STORY ENDS WITH THE LINE  
"HAPPILY EVER AFTER..."!!!
MANY TIMES HE THINKS OF CALLING HER, 
BUT THEIR LAST TALK, LAST ARGUMENT BRINGS HIM MORE PAIN
'YOU ARE VERY POSSESSIVE', SHE TOLD, 
HE WAS CONFUSED, SHE LOVED THAT BEFORE! 
'YOU ARE AGGRESSIVE', SHE TOLD, 
BUT WAS HE REALLY?
HE WAS HURT, HE TOO WAS ANGRY, 
HE STOPPED CALLING HER FOR FEW DAYS, 
BUT HIS HEART WAS NOT LOYAL TO HIM ANYMORE,
HE TRIED CALLING HER AGAIN, SHE DID NOT ANSWERED FOR MANY DAYS,
THEN HER CELL WAS SWITCHED OFF FOREVER....

HE IS WAITING FOR HER CALL NOW...

WILL HE BE WAITING FOREVER?
OR 
HIS WAITING WILL BE SOON OVER?
WILL THEY MEET AGAIN?
AND FORGET THEIR PAIN?

LOVE STORIES NEVER HAVE HAPPY ENDING!!
BECAUSE THERE IS NO END  FOR LOVE.
LOVE IS ABOVE ALL THESE THINGS. IF LOVE ENDS, THE WORLD ENDS...
DO YOU BELIEVE IN IT?

Keep Loving,

18 comments:

Anonymous said...

Beautiful written nive..I am sure he is thinking about her right now..maybe he has his own reason not to call her...but i am sure one day she will see him ...yes love never end..love always begin..

listen this song
jise hasna rona hai woh pyar kare

Anonymous said...

What do u think nivedita- vl she come back???

nivedita said...

@ 1st anonymous : I pray that he is thinking still about her..
@ 2nd anonymous : do you want her to come back to him???

Anonymous said...

Yea, I really want her to come back!!!

nivedita said...

@ anonymous : but how? both are waiting for each other and they don't know the way!! do you know the way???

Anonymous said...

Even I don know nivedita!.
U asked me na so said it vl be nice if they meet!!!

Anonymous said...

Might be their common friends might sort out the thing!

nivedita said...

@ anonymous: anyways these are only my thoughts, so no point in discussing the things about how they meet. Thanks for the comments, keep visiting my blog and encourage with your views.
I am happy that my thoughts are strong and could make others feel the pain..

Anonymous said...

Yea nivedita.
So Nicely written:-).
They doesn seem lyk thoughts jus seems a real story!

nivedita said...

Thank you so much:-)
But I was just curious why are you hiding your name? you can introduce yourself here :-)

mallica said...

So touching ..hoping they would meet again and sort out their problems, their love is eternal ..but human failures sometimes cuts of links in frustrations..
So well written Nivetidha literally a poet with feeling well placed too good ma too goodcomiedra

mallica said...

So touching ..hoping they would meet again and sort out their problems, their love is eternal ..but human failures sometimes cuts of links in frustrations..
So well written Nivetidha literally a poet with feeling well placed too good ma too good

mallica said...

So touching ..hoping they would meet again and sort out their problems, their love is eternal ..but human failures sometimes cuts of links in frustrations..
So well written Nivetidha literally a poet with feeling well placed too good ma too good

mallica said...

So touching ..hoping they would meet again and sort out their problems, their love is eternal ..but human failures sometimes cuts of links in frustrations..
So well written Nivetidha literally a poet with feeling well placed too good ma too good

Anonymous said...

because as filmy:),in dt guy I m seein myself.:(

nivedita said...

@ anonymous : does it look filmy :-9
no its almost the true story..
To whom are you waiting for?

Anonymous said...

No no i din meant ur story as filmy! It seems damn true!
I meant myself thinkin dt guy seems a bit filmy. As aftr watchin a muv v think me n my lyf s almost lyk dt hero but in reality it wont be.
Ah! M confused! Hope u understood nivedita:-)
m waitin 4 sum1 to whom i oly threw out f my lyf. But i was childish at dt tym. Wasn knowin anythin.not even d meanin f luv. But nw i came in my senses but lost 1 f d precious thing f my lyf!!!
Leave it

nivedita said...

@ Anonymous: sorry for your past.
I pray to God that you will get your love back in your life.
I know the pain. But life has to move on.. Keep smiling :-))))